ummm im so hooked i love this sm?????? like the story and the characterisation are so good (started on a trigger run and π₯Ί ma i love him) and the MUSIC???? i loveee a good fiddle and this is some very good fiddle!!!!!!
DNIRDJFH I haven't played this through in so long that for a sec I was like damn I put MUSIC in this, cool !! But I remember, I was very proud of myself for the radio gjdncbdk. I also love fiddle music, I can't remember though because my friend plays violin and I intended to put in a recorded practice session but I don't think I've implemented it yet fjdbfnd
Oh gosh is that the full screen, cut off like that and all? Seems like a caching issue, but keep in mind that if you clear your cache you may lose save data from other Twine games. Something is interfering with your device's ability to go fullscreen properly, anyway.
This is a very fun story to read, I'm rather excited to learn more about our guardian and about who/what Zed is (I really liked how you wrote them communicating with the plants, that was very interesting and creative!) and am really invested in learning more about the world that you have made and the place of the MC in it. The bits of storytelling through dialogue is very well done (learning about how this society works and the dangers is very cool) and I like the voice that you use to write, it really draws the reader in I think. I also really like learning more about Crave and am rather attached to him already, as well as learning more about Mantis who seems very interesting. Hope that you have a good day.
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ AHH THIS IS SO SWEET TY SO MUCH !!! I'm glad you like playing as Zed and hopw you like the mystery !! Also jazzed you like the wonder twins fjdnfjsknd you have a good day too !!!! πππππππππππππππππππππ
Your writing is amazing! I'm sooooo glad you updated this! Itβs so refreshing to play an MC whoβs actually the weird and mysterious one. I canβt wait to uncover more of their secrets!
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Just commenting to say i adore the radio stations and the fact we can switch through them. The dude practicing his singing is my fav lol :D
YAY TY ππππππ I still love the radio jxjfkdjff
I love this sm, I love the contrast to other IFs where the MC is the one being figured out! It's a shame it's so short though :(
Luckily it's still being worked on π slowly but surely !!
I'm glad! I need more Mantis content </3
The menu looks weird, and there are two error messages:
I need to know which menu π
The very first one, New game etc, but... Apparently... It works now? I haven't changed browser or anything π§
Well, bugs are weird! I can try it now at least, haha.
Yay !! The easiest bug fixes are the ones that vanish mysteriously ππππ
WE NEED AN UPD FIREππΌ
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ummm im so hooked i love this sm?????? like the story and the characterisation are so good (started on a trigger run and π₯Ί ma i love him) and the MUSIC???? i loveee a good fiddle and this is some very good fiddle!!!!!!
DNIRDJFH I haven't played this through in so long that for a sec I was like damn I put MUSIC in this, cool !! But I remember, I was very proud of myself for the radio gjdncbdk. I also love fiddle music, I can't remember though because my friend plays violin and I intended to put in a recorded practice session but I don't think I've implemented it yet fjdbfnd
I'm try to play this game on my phone but the selection doesn't appear so I'm stuck in the prolog.
Can you take a screenshot for me?
Sorry taking long time for me to really Κγ)α΄₯(γΎΚ
Oh gosh is that the full screen, cut off like that and all? Seems like a caching issue, but keep in mind that if you clear your cache you may lose save data from other Twine games. Something is interfering with your device's ability to go fullscreen properly, anyway.
if it can fix it I don't mind, thanks for the help :b
I hope that does fix it !!! πππ
This is a very fun story to read, I'm rather excited to learn more about our guardian and about who/what Zed is (I really liked how you wrote them communicating with the plants, that was very interesting and creative!) and am really invested in learning more about the world that you have made and the place of the MC in it. The bits of storytelling through dialogue is very well done (learning about how this society works and the dangers is very cool) and I like the voice that you use to write, it really draws the reader in I think. I also really like learning more about Crave and am rather attached to him already, as well as learning more about Mantis who seems very interesting. Hope that you have a good day.
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ AHH THIS IS SO SWEET TY SO MUCH !!! I'm glad you like playing as Zed and hopw you like the mystery !! Also jazzed you like the wonder twins fjdnfjsknd you have a good day too !!!! πππππππππππππππππππππ
Your writing is amazing! I'm sooooo glad you updated this! Itβs so refreshing to play an MC whoβs actually the weird and mysterious one. I canβt wait to uncover more of their secrets!
JFJSI weird and mysterious unironically huge compliments thank you so much πππππππ