I've been a fan of your work for a fairly long while, but I've always been too timid to comment, so I'm just going to go for it. I love this "new" project!! The setting is really interesting and unique, the writing is snappy and clean and fun to read, and I am deeply invested in the 'reluctant buddy-cop' vibe I'm getting from Siruud and MC's "partnership."
Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic work with us; I'm really excited to see where this goes! <3 :)
I knew it was still in development when I started but noooo I want more XD. I didn't realise I was reading romance at first because I was too excited to read the tags lol but it was really good! Siruud kind of reminds me of Howl from Howls Moving Castle. They just kind of give off the same vibe especially the book version of Howl. Anyway can't wait for more <3
You've been one of my favorites for a long time, but re-reading this has reminded me that I absolutely love your writing.
And Siruud.
I can't wait for him to realize he's in love with MC.
I found quite a few of the same issues the first poster did. Looks like just missing some opening/closing tags for your italics, so hopefully won't be too much work.
I can't wait for more Manor Hill and Hybrid! And this new one I just noticed! Just to be sure, the demo is ended right after meeting the two agents outside the subway, correct? There is no option to continue or restart.
I love this format and hope to see a lot more works migrate that way.
Yep, that's where it ends !! I gotta make a restart button, I thought Twine would work differently once it was run but I'm being proven wrong real time 😅😅 it's a pretty fast fix though so at least by tomorrow it'll be fixed !!
I love it!! At first I was hesitant with the color scheme of red font with a black background (eye strain), but was pleasantly surprised that they brighten to white upon a mouse rollover. It also helps distinguishing when there are multiple options to choose from.
Question though, I've never used this type of format/platform, so how does one restart the game? I see the save button, but no menu or even load.
I think I made a mistake with regards to how Twine ends up working when actually in browser. With the HTML file itself I could keep launching and it would start from the beginning every time: I don't think it does that here 😅😅 quick fix !!
Ahh yeah x.x It's an issue with the format it was in vs the format it's in now. Twine uses HTML tags (so tags surrounded by <>) but the previous format used tags in []. It's not a matter of forgetting tags so much as they're just formatted wrong 😅😅 thought I got them all, thanks for letting me know !!
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I've been a fan of your work for a fairly long while, but I've always been too timid to comment, so I'm just going to go for it. I love this "new" project!! The setting is really interesting and unique, the writing is snappy and clean and fun to read, and I am deeply invested in the 'reluctant buddy-cop' vibe I'm getting from Siruud and MC's "partnership."
Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic work with us; I'm really excited to see where this goes! <3 :)
AH I'm glad you commented !! And I'm glad you're liking Siruud !!!! 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
I knew it was still in development when I started but noooo I want more XD. I didn't realise I was reading romance at first because I was too excited to read the tags lol but it was really good! Siruud kind of reminds me of Howl from Howls Moving Castle. They just kind of give off the same vibe especially the book version of Howl. Anyway can't wait for more <3
Siruud WOULD end up being a himbo from Wales 😂😂 all this mystique WASTED...I'm glad you liked it !! Thanks for commenting !!!!! 🧡🧡🧡🧡
You've been one of my favorites for a long time, but re-reading this has reminded me that I absolutely love your writing.
And Siruud.
I can't wait for him to realize he's in love with MC.
I found quite a few of the same issues the first poster did. Looks like just missing some opening/closing tags for your italics, so hopefully won't be too much work.
I can't wait for more Manor Hill and Hybrid! And this new one I just noticed! Just to be sure, the demo is ended right after meeting the two agents outside the subway, correct? There is no option to continue or restart.
I love this format and hope to see a lot more works migrate that way.
Yep, that's where it ends !! I gotta make a restart button, I thought Twine would work differently once it was run but I'm being proven wrong real time 😅😅 it's a pretty fast fix though so at least by tomorrow it'll be fixed !!
I love it!! At first I was hesitant with the color scheme of red font with a black background (eye strain), but was pleasantly surprised that they brighten to white upon a mouse rollover. It also helps distinguishing when there are multiple options to choose from.
Question though, I've never used this type of format/platform, so how does one restart the game? I see the save button, but no menu or even load.
I think I made a mistake with regards to how Twine ends up working when actually in browser. With the HTML file itself I could keep launching and it would start from the beginning every time: I don't think it does that here 😅😅 quick fix !!
This format is fun and the writing is epic as always! Look forward to seeing what happens next.
Did find a small issue in the text (think it was italic coding that broke):
Siruud's head snaps towards you as if you have been around her without him for ieven a moment,/i and you glower back at him.
Ahh yeah x.x It's an issue with the format it was in vs the format it's in now. Twine uses HTML tags (so tags surrounded by <>) but the previous format used tags in []. It's not a matter of forgetting tags so much as they're just formatted wrong 😅😅 thought I got them all, thanks for letting me know !!