Hello author! Just giving you fair warning that that I am excitedly and also impatiently going to chew on all my furniture until we get more, if I run out of furniture I'm coming for your walls next! :)
Hello again author just noticed you are also responsible for me ever seeing more Gnarl content in Manor Hill so fair warning it isn't looking good for the structural integrity of your home :) love your work tho!
Just dropping in to check on this + manor hill. I think I'll replay them later. I've been watching these for a while, your writing is excellent! Figured I'd finally tell ya :)
ooooh, i remember this one from choice of games – if it is what my faulty brain remembered correctly. if it is, i am so glad to see it back! if not, forgive me. but im sure I'll adore it from the synopsis alone, i can already tell.
I am sooo beyond in love with this. Your writing voice is SPECTACULAR and addicting to read, and your characters are so loveable. I am absolutely head over heels for all of them, as well as how you illustrate the protag...I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, I'll definitely be donating to your Ko-fi! <3
AHH THANK YOU I'm glad you like it !! The next update is going to be a wild tech update with a couple rewrites just for consistency (oops, serialization is hard dsjklfsdkjf) so it'll be a big one !!!
oh my god!!!!! I love the sexy demon man I haven't been able to get him out of my head since I first played this I can't wait to see more I wish you the best this is very good have my love and appreciation <33333 :33
TY !! I'm glad you enjoyed the defenestration fkdbckskzns. I peeked at the game the other day it needs a HUGE technical update that'll probably come before new content 😅 but day by day we get closer.
Sure am! It needs a huge update to accomodate some new features to make it easier to read/the mc more customisable/a skim for content, so that's all going on.
You cant leave me on a cliffhanger with an "Oh...*MC name" sort of cliffhanger
cake was smeared all over my lips when i dead eyed stared at the end of the demo screen
I honestly love your writing and this story. hope everything fares well for you in whatever youre doing!!!! And it was actually an easy read for me cause of the bare UI,my ADHD ass gets easily distracted when theres random stuff placed all over the screen so it only took me like 10 hours to read through the entire demo while it would normally take me days. sorry for the long comment but i like your story and will also be reading through 'Hybrid"
I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad the UI made the story easier to read: that's always my goal! Soery about leaving you on the cliff (or thrown off the cliff 😂), and I hope you like Hybrid too! Dw about long comments, I love them 🥹
Ah thank-you so much !! Don't worry, it's definitely still in development, and it's due to get a bit of an upgrade when it comes to UI and stuff as well !! 💚💚💚
When I saw the end screen, my face shifted in to an offended one so quickly. Your story has me wrapped around it's finger, and it cuts off at a major moment, and I'm so upset /lh /hj
Anyways, I'm in love with this story, and can't wait for there to be more! Have a fantabulous week :)
Literally sang the "all around me are familiar faces" meme song when I saw the end of the demo screen. A daddy long leg spider the size of my palm almost crawled on me and I didn't immediately panic because my love for this story dampened my shock and disgust for the insect. I love this story so much.
Made an account just so I could express how close this story is to my heart!! The writing style, the story, and especially the characters are so fleshed out it brings a tear to my eye :'). It was surprisingly really easy to get immersed into this and I find myself coming back to reread it because I genuinely just miss the world and its characters. I absolutely adore this story and I can't thank you enough!! I really hope this is still being updated/ worked on, but even if it's not, I'm really just grateful for what you've given us so far. <3 If anything I'll just continue self indulgently daydreaming about it :)
AHH THIS IS SO SWEET don't worry it's definitely still in development. The next one is a big one as it gets some quality improvements with regards to progression and maybe a few other features 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
I loved this so much, played it all in one sitting and I just want more. And boy, do I LOVE my archdemon Siruund, he's so sweet and funny. It's SO GOOD. Please keep up your amazing story
I feel utterly bamboozled and excited and I can't WAIT for more Siruud content AND more Bright content (because come on, a creepy CEO with monster powers who immediately tries to kill you? I'm all about it). This is seriously awesome. You're a brilliant writer and I want to romance and tease the hell out of these men!!
Unfortunately I need more information than this! What were you doing, from what page did you move to this page, what browser are you using, are you connected to the internet while you play. You're not getting any of the CSS, I can see: maybe try clearing your cache?
Hello again! I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned your story in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1 (Not sure if I mentioned this already, let me know if I already have >_< )
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Love this
ty 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
Really like this a lot, the writing's hilarious but really atmospheric as well.
Siruud Babygirl.
hfkcjfjx !! I'm glad you like it !! 💚💚💚💚💚💚
is this still being worked on or is it on hiatus
Still being worked on !! Needs a big tech update so it's taking a while.
thx for the reply !! i look forward to more
I'm coming for your cookies :>
If you eat the cookies then the browser wont be able to hold your save game 😂
Oy, it's fine cause it won't hold it anyway, so you better make the last moments with your cookies dear :>
I love this and will perish without more. Really fantastic writing, and I adore the characters. You are amazing, thank you for sharing this with us!
NFIWJ THANK YOU I'm glad you like it !! Update and structural rewrite are coming along nicely !!
no pressure, even though I said I’d perish! I’ll only perish a little. I’m just absolutely hooked!
Hello author! Just giving you fair warning that that I am excitedly and also impatiently going to chew on all my furniture until we get more, if I run out of furniture I'm coming for your walls next! :)
💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚 i'm glad you like it and rip to my walls !!!!!
Hello again author just noticed you are also responsible for me ever seeing more Gnarl content in Manor Hill so fair warning it isn't looking good for the structural integrity of your home :) love your work tho!
I am eager to see the new updates (and rewrites as I've read the comments xD) !!
They're coming along pretty good !!! I'm excited for the tech update, the back end of this game is a mess 😅😅💚💚💚💚
Well ! Take your time ! It's unnecessary to speed yourself anyway, I'm sure it will be great ! ^^
Your writing is CAPTIVATING. I love all of your games and can't wait for updates, this one is my fav
Update is clipping right along !! I'm glad you like it 💚💚💚💚💚
Just found this and so glad to see its still ongoing in the comments. I truly enjoyed what I've read so far! ♥️
I'm glad to hear it !! The tech update + rewrites is going well and will probably be posted first, THEN new content 😅
i love this game smmmm :oooo <3333
author, many thanks for your amazingly talented writing and the gorgeous demon you've blessed us with *bows*
ill definitely be checking in every now and then for updates ^v^
I'm plugging away at it as we speak !! It's due for a tech upgrade and a content polish 😅
Just dropping in to check on this + manor hill. I think I'll replay them later. I've been watching these for a while, your writing is excellent! Figured I'd finally tell ya :)
Thank-you !!! I appreciate it 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
love this
💚💚 thanks!
ooooh, i remember this one from choice of games – if it is what my faulty brain remembered correctly. if it is, i am so glad to see it back! if not, forgive me. but im sure I'll adore it from the synopsis alone, i can already tell.
You're right! I switched over to Twine a while back 💚
oh my god your writing is impeccable and siruud has me in an absolute chokehold, keep up the great work!!!
Is this game still ongoing? 🤔
Yep! 💚
Tyy! 💚 Oh and is manor hill still going?
It is, yes! They trade off on development so it's why they have such long update gaps. That and all the code work fjfkdbsj
I can only imagine how hard that might be, good luck and make sure to take breaks!
Ty 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
WOWOWIE I LOVE UR WRITING SM!!! keeping an eye on this one!
THANK YOU i'm glad you like it !!!!! 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
I am sooo beyond in love with this. Your writing voice is SPECTACULAR and addicting to read, and your characters are so loveable. I am absolutely head over heels for all of them, as well as how you illustrate the protag...I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, I'll definitely be donating to your Ko-fi! <3
AHH THANK YOU I'm glad you like it !! The next update is going to be a wild tech update with a couple rewrites just for consistency (oops, serialization is hard dsjklfsdkjf) so it'll be a big one !!!
oh my god!!!!! I love the sexy demon man I haven't been able to get him out of my head since I first played this I can't wait to see more I wish you the best this is very good have my love and appreciation <33333 :33
JDUFJAJ so glad you like him despite him. A big overhaul is coming, but it definitely requires a lot of coding 😅😅😅😅💚💚💚💚💚💚
the audible gasp I let out at the cliff hanger good lord man
the writing is already amazing i'm a whole simp for the demon man got me kicking my feet
i'm so very excited to see where you take this!!
TY !! I'm glad you enjoyed the defenestration fkdbckskzns. I peeked at the game the other day it needs a HUGE technical update that'll probably come before new content 😅 but day by day we get closer.
Are you still writing this? I hope so because I really love it. :)
Sure am! It needs a huge update to accomodate some new features to make it easier to read/the mc more customisable/a skim for content, so that's all going on.
EEEEEE!!! I'm SO excited!!!! Yay!!! I can't wait! I mean, I can, but I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update!!!!
(P.s. I never knew I needed a gif of a baby pug spinning because they're so excited! Now I do :p 😊 )
cannot wait to smooch the big ol demon boy <3
Glad you like him !! 💚💚💚💚💚
Moment at word choice time and i see "P-Please...ligma.." in the options, i know what will i choose.
thank you for enabling me fidjshdkak 💚💚💚💚💚
You cant leave me on a cliffhanger with an "Oh...*MC name" sort of cliffhanger
cake was smeared all over my lips when i dead eyed stared at the end of the demo screen
I honestly love your writing and this story. hope everything fares well for you in whatever youre doing!!!! And it was actually an easy read for me cause of the bare UI,my ADHD ass gets easily distracted when theres random stuff placed all over the screen so it only took me like 10 hours to read through the entire demo while it would normally take me days. sorry for the long comment but i like your story and will also be reading through 'Hybrid"
I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad the UI made the story easier to read: that's always my goal! Soery about leaving you on the cliff (or thrown off the cliff 😂), and I hope you like Hybrid too! Dw about long comments, I love them 🥹
Oh my goodness.... I absolutely love your story!
Character build is so captivating, I instantly felt connected to the MC. Siruud is such a mesmerizing being & I really adore your writing style! ♥️
Really, really hope this story will be continued sometime 😢 it stopped at such an interesting scene
Ah thank-you so much !! Don't worry, it's definitely still in development, and it's due to get a bit of an upgrade when it comes to UI and stuff as well !! 💚💚💚
Awwww cmon the cliffhanger?!!!! Whyyy
I can't describe the amount of affection I have for this IF! It's an absolute masterpiece ❤️
Don't let me even get started on siruud, he is simply the best.
Can't wait for the next update;_;
Ahh ty !!!! I'm glad you liked it 💚💚💚💚💚
When I saw the end screen, my face shifted in to an offended one so quickly. Your story has me wrapped around it's finger, and it cuts off at a major moment, and I'm so upset /lh /hj
Anyways, I'm in love with this story, and can't wait for there to be more! Have a fantabulous week :)
Ahhh ty I'm glad you liked it !!!! Djjfs and on the bright side at least MC didn't splatter onto the pavement, so things could be worse !!
Literally sang the "all around me are familiar faces" meme song when I saw the end of the demo screen. A daddy long leg spider the size of my palm almost crawled on me and I didn't immediately panic because my love for this story dampened my shock and disgust for the insect. I love this story so much.
JFHVHN I'm glad you like it 💚💚💚💚 and that it postponed the death of a bug. Honoured 💚💚💚💚
Made an account just so I could express how close this story is to my heart!! The writing style, the story, and especially the characters are so fleshed out it brings a tear to my eye :'). It was surprisingly really easy to get immersed into this and I find myself coming back to reread it because I genuinely just miss the world and its characters. I absolutely adore this story and I can't thank you enough!! I really hope this is still being updated/ worked on, but even if it's not, I'm really just grateful for what you've given us so far. <3 If anything I'll just continue self indulgently daydreaming about it :)
AHH THIS IS SO SWEET don't worry it's definitely still in development. The next one is a big one as it gets some quality improvements with regards to progression and maybe a few other features 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
Simply amazing, I'm VERY excited to read more!
👀♥️
glad you liked it 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
I love you for adding the club scene where MC has-
(Spoiler for a scene!)
sensory overload thank you so much 🥺
Best boyfriend has healing properties ☺️
I loved this so much, played it all in one sitting and I just want more. And boy, do I LOVE my archdemon Siruund, he's so sweet and funny. It's SO GOOD. Please keep up your amazing story
Thank-you, I'm glad you like it !!! 💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚
PLEASE your writing is so fucking FUNNY i LOVE iT.
jfianfjskd THANK YOU I'm glad you enjoyed urself 🤣
I feel utterly bamboozled and excited and I can't WAIT for more Siruud content AND more Bright content (because come on, a creepy CEO with monster powers who immediately tries to kill you? I'm all about it). This is seriously awesome. You're a brilliant writer and I want to romance and tease the hell out of these men!!
💚💚💚💚💚💚 I'm glad you found Siruud too 😂😂💚💚
LIGMA????
🚨 L I G M A B A L L S 🚨
Truly love this game!!
TY 💚💚💚💚
help for magic does anyone know what exactly blight is? I've literally never heard of it before
Blight is kind of a combo between poison/general illness !!
This also appeared in Bad Ritual.
Unfortunately I need more information than this! What were you doing, from what page did you move to this page, what browser are you using, are you connected to the internet while you play. You're not getting any of the CSS, I can see: maybe try clearing your cache?
Siruud doesn’t want to admit it but he’s in love with me and my amazing butt/j
In all seriousness great game can’t wait for more 🙌
(I took every opportunity in that demo that was given to me to be a suspicious little gay 😩🤌)
He'll be so mad when he finally figures it out 😂😂
😂
Hello again! I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned your story in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1 (Not sure if I mentioned this already, let me know if I already have >_< )
Thank-you !! That's fine by me 💚
Just played though Siruud's route and I loved it. Super funny and had me smiling the whole though! Now to play Tahira's route.
💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚 hope you like her as much as demon boy 👀