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Such a fun read! I love the bickering between irritable MC and Siruud - he's such an interesting and charming character. Also, the way MC's stats and achievements are presented is so creative; I kept checking after certain events to see how it would update. Looking forward to the next update!

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๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š thank you for commenting !!!! I'm glad you liked it !!!!!!!  ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

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Loved the update! Can't wait for more!

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๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š thanks !!!!!!

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Love the game. Just wanted to report that when you load a save, it changes your magic attribute to fire (originally I had chosen blight). Thank you, and I can't wait for more

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My old enemy....this bug....lemme have a look, but last update was also doing it in a way I couldn't replicate. I'll hunt it down!

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WE'RE CHEERING FOR YOU 

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There is a workaround for this problem, it worked for me at least. Just clear cookies and switch off all Auto-fills. I have no idea how Auto-fill affects the saves, and the author is pretty positive that it shouldn't, but it does somehow. I have a clean browser on my laptop for the purpose to play this game only :D Just finished reading through the new version, "The magic bug" never happened. Also in my experience it didn't happen in Safari browser on iPhone with default settings.

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:OOOOOOOOO WAIT FR !!! This would explain why I can't replicate it, none of my browsers are allowed to autofill anything....

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can't wait for more!!!

Thank-you !!!!!! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

I really love the writing and story of this IF, it's one of my favorites, but the UI is just really...not great. That next button is terrifyingly close to that restart button. A restart button that has no confirmation and for some reason deletes all saves as well, and since there's no way to even export saves, it's like constantly playing fat finger Russian roulette. It's not going to stop me from reading, but I really do wish it was one of the standard IF templates.

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Are you playing on mobile?  I'm playing (at work lol) on a computer, and my next button is by the saves.

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I write it at work too ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

As the poster above me mentioned, it's just a matter of screen size. I have it set to adjust depending on the size of the screen but if it's a slightly larger or small phone than average, or a tablet or something like that then I unfortunately have little control over how it displays. I can try to make some micro adjustments later tonight but without specifics there's only so much I can do.

I don't use the programming language most common among Twine games. There's no save export and the layout isn't standard because this is all custom programmed by me. I started using Twine back in 2017 and taught myself to use it so it is what it is. I do not use templates, standard or otherwise.

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Ehem, jokes aside this is pretty good. Though being fully honest I would not have made the promise with T, kinda a shame it's necessary for the story because it's just not something I would have ever done ever. Part from that, I love being able to do a ligma joke, truly peak gameplay. Great game.

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There's an option to not want to do the pact! Unfortunately that doesn't matter to T, who does want you to do the pact.

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Oh I'm well aware, I have chosen to both not want to promise and not do the pact, sadly the character promise anyways since it, you know, matters to the story. And you do the pact wether you want to or not, appreciate the help though.

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commenting to mark that i've played up until the 04.01.24 update. can't wait for  more!

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This was so much fun!! I love the Siruud route and I honestly like how the magic and hexes and stuff works in this universe. I really like how the relationships develop and GOD some of the dialogue choices were so funny. Really hope we get more updates!! Super intriguing story

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Still in active development, no worries !!! Just in line behind my other games rn ๐Ÿ˜‚ I'm glad you liked it !!!!! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

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Wow, I had so much fun reading this! I really like the story and ngl, I love the Siruud path. Gotta ask, will there be more chapters? Would love to see more of them! (totally understand if the game's finished)

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It's not finished !! I just juggle games to make sure I don't burn out ๐Ÿ˜‚ this one JUST got it's update so it won't shuffle back to the front of the line until the other ones get theirs, but it's definitely still in development. My game Hybrid's up next, if you wanted more reading material ๐Ÿ˜‚ thanks for commenting !!!!

Ah, okay, thank you for the reply! I'll def check out the other ones when I have the time. And no problem, I saw someone on Reddit recommending your game so I got curious, and I don't regret it lol

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Woah, played it again, still awesome! Anyway, minor question. Is the Eden introduction scene cut? The one with the electrocution(???I think? my memory is unreliable) and spilled drinks?

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Uh, no electrocution, but the spilled drink bit might have been cut on the rewrite!

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Ah, thanks for the confirmation!! (seriously, wtf is my brain cooking lmao)

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Gfhjub zapping is thankfully not within his skillset. He'd be unbearable with so little as static ๐Ÿ˜‚

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Wow this was amazing !!

Thank you !!!!! I'm glad you like it ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

I'm not usually into these kinds of games, but this is genuinely really fun, and the writing is awesome! 

Thank you !!!!! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

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Sorry for the bother but I was wondering if this was something on my end. It's preventing me from progressing as well.

I think it was just an old save that no longer works, not exactly sure though.

Oh boy I hope it's an old save issue because I couldn't begin to guess why it's trying to reimagine your MCs name as a number djhfjzjf does it work on a new game?

It does. I'm so sorry for the bother and the very late response.

Oh no you're good, I love an easy solution: unfortunately, sometimes old saves don't move forward !! Luckily that's why I made the build a save feature, so you're at least able to jump up to where you were !!

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